General feedback on this weeks progress

1. What are your geometries that are part of the ground and what are the ones that are part of the air (marker)? How do you moderate the transition and hierarchy between the ground and the air?

2. Details should not be arbitrary and avoid making your design appear additive, ie a design that is 10 blocks with a truckload of stuff thrown on top of it. Consider carving, materiality, tucking, adjacencies, joints as moments where you can insert some detail moments to.

You should also look back at the work of your two architects for inspiration on your details.

3. All of you should address the curvilinear intervention to some of your masses. Only half of the ones I've seen so far has.

4.GET A MOVE ON!

Watch this space, more while I review.